P. McKercher 2.17.99

Please correct these (some are ok as is, or perhaps could be better stylistically, though grammar is technically correct) and email a copy of corrections to me and yourself (or bring a hard copy to class).

1. How you look is the most important thing in the world, it comes

before the way you act and only one step behind the way you smell.

Although Right Guard might not agree with that totally.

2. Light comes down on it from above, as if even the gods approved

of this heavenly creation.

3. Their notoriety has reached humans of all ages forming curiosity and awareness alike.

4. A lifestyle I find so captivating and inviting.

5. In this ad, the woman is relaxing in a bubble bath with her champagne flute of Alize Red Passion while watching a man in the other room, set up the stereo.

6. For some it is a certain pair of comfortable shoes and for others it may be their Yankees baseball cap; but as for me, it is my necklace made of comic strips that I am never seen without.

7. Over the years, affirmative action has become a more prominent issue, as this occurred there was a noticeable change in the content of many ads.

8. The transition to becoming enviromentally aware, makes it seem as though in the past we have been under a cloud, thinking that the human race will go on forever, regardless of actions.

9. Being thin and pretty automatically insures some sense

(superficial though it may be) of happiness and gratification from life.

10. Posters such as the one I've just described, have simple yet

complex functions.

11. The central focus is a bluish sea monster with a friendly and

charming expression on his face, carrying a young woman in a house-dress and apron smoking a cigarette, in his arms.

12. All in all this is a very well done ad for it captures the

attention of both men and women.

13. This is saying to modern men it's time that you take time out and

since that may not be possible, try this cologne and it's like you are

there.

14. My beanie slug has two, expressive, big, black, round eyes, two sting-like antennas, and a big, banana-shaped smile.

15. The warm caress of the whipped cream on my lips makes me sigh with delight and I softly run my tongue just above the rim of the cup.

16. A subtle reminder of how the only way to have a wonderful vacation is to go on a Disney vacation.

17. Giving them one more place to advertise themselves.

18. Boys and girls alike, dressed to look ten years older than they really are and of a higher class society.

19. Most people don't appreciate the power of a dictionary, I didn't at first.